Time Traveler – An Introvertical

Time moves because the traveler
Exists with bags packed
To journey from point A to
Measure the depth of a heart or
The lay of the land, but in a
Lapse of concentration,
In a moment of automation,
Living becomes blurred
With goals unaligned in
A path gone astray beyond
Knowledge and in pettiness
Of sorts as dreams lay
Dying, learning late of destinies
Marked upon foreheads
By life manifested in
Moments of pure goodness
In which we look for
Love beyond a purchase
And find intrinsic truths to
Enlightenment to point B.

Copyright Ā© 2013 Shainbird. All rights reserved.

Note: Sahm at BWP gave us “Poetry Prompt #17: Messages.” Introvertical is a form created by Poet Kurt Frazier, check out the original Introvertical: Hidden Truth. To read other Introverticals, see the pingbacks at Thursday Poetry Prompt #17: Messages.

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About Shainbird

"A lonely craftsman putting one word after another."
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12 Responses to Time Traveler – An Introvertical

  1. Brilliant so very, very clever!!! šŸ™‚ šŸ™‚

  2. Bastet says:

    This was fantastically done and your message is poetic philosophy!

  3. tjtherien says:

    amazing message worked in here without disrupting the poem… very well done Shain

  4. Kurt Frazier says:

    Definitely raised the bar with this one! Love the Point A to point B linear counterpoint. Thank you for perfectly demonstrating this form.

    • Shainbird says:

      Thank you so much Kurt, especially for this brilliant form! I feel like the test driver and you are the designer of the race car šŸ™‚ Your form would be an awesome addition to the ShadowPoetry website!

  5. Pingback: Monday and Thursday Poetry Prompt #17 Results! | We Drink Because We're Poets

  6. Sahm King says:

    I have to agree with Kurt. Definitely raised the bar. Great piece, Shainbird! šŸ™‚

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