sun with rain pass time wind whistles through apertures turbines stand rusted
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interesting how the rust on the fan reminds us of autumn…love your haiku.
Thank you Georgia, the orange and burn, beautiful seasonal colors 🙂
Of course you are quite right…tells us something about those colors in nature too 😉
The title makes the haiku so sad, to think of rusted hearts. Love the haiku.
True, thank you for saying so Cubby, I think with the brevity of the poem, the title must add to its length.
Turbines stay rusted is simply so powerful. Great piece.
Thank you so much!
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