rain
sweet, auspicious
hoping, collecting, submerging
empyrean, vertical, reflective, souled
depleting, lamenting, releasing
salty, ominous
tears
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Note: This is for Bastet’s Pixelventures: October 1, 2013: Rain.
Ooo I like this SB.
Thank you Jim 🙂
beautiful diamante Shain… I really like the feel of the words… they flow like rain… they flow like tears…
Thank you Tim, how lovely your words.
I love this Diamante, well done.
Thank you Dom.
Love, love, love! I feel like such a novice – there are so many poetry forms that I don’t know. This is so beautiful. The photo has such great movement. The poem is so moving – from rain to tears!
I learned two things – a diamante poem – and the word empyrean. Thank you 🙂
Thank you Rob! Sometimes when I’m at an impasse, I use forms to pull me through, many are new to me, but, old and new, they serve as great teachers. Thanks for your lovely words!
A brilliant diamante. Love it. 🙂
Thank you Cubby 🙂
Pretty – I love the flow, as well and your lovely choice of words.
Thank you Kimberly 🙂
you are welcome:)
Brilliant! Loved the form and your choice of words!
Thank you Selena!
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