Promises Unkempt

Promise unkempt
Dressed in tatters
In strong wind scatters

Made to preempt
Yet give way
By light of day

Awake in contempt
Past lost intentions
Seduced by mentions

Copyright © 2013 Shainbird. All rights reserved.

NaNoWriMo Day 6: 1576 


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"A lonely craftsman putting one word after another."
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7 Responses to Promises Unkempt

  1. Bastet says:

    It so saddens me when promises are not kept…you’ve expressed it well.

  2. “Past lost intentions”- It happens. Well-penned. 🙂

  3. Oloriel says:

    I loved the poem and the rhyme scheme, it speaks truth close to the heart.

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